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Reviews by Khyrie
First Day of School by angelaask starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Willow moves away and meets some interesting people. BTVS/X-Men Evolution
Characters: None - Genres: Romance, Crossover - Rating: G - Warnings: Spoilers for BtVS S3 - Chapters: 4
Published: 29/07/04 - Updated: 26/06/05 - Completed: No

Reviewer: Khyrie Signed starstar
Date: 26/06/05 Title: Chapter 2: Doomed

I really like the concept and story, but the grammar needs some work. I'd like to read this after it's been proofread and updated. Unfortunately, I couldn't make it past the second chapter because of all the errors. I admit I'm an ESL teacher, so that probably makes me more sensitive than usual.

Author's Response: No you're probably right. My grammar is terrible. If you don't mind can you point out some of the major errors. I am truly blind when it comes to proofreading my own work and I have yet to find a beta.

The authors own nothing. Joss, UPN, WB, etc. own Buffy, the show, the characters, the places, and the backstory. The authors own any original plots.