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All In My Head by willohand starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
This is a story about Willow Rosenberg. There is a war going on inside her mind, losing is not an option. Her inner demons are battling for control of her psyche as she fights for her true identity that has been slowing shedding away due to her abuse of dark magic.
Rated NC-17
Characters: Other, Rack, Tara, Willow - Genres: Drama, Angst - Rating: NC-17 - Warnings: Spoilers for BtVS S6 - Chapters: 5
Published: 07/07/04 - Updated: 16/08/04 - Completed: No

Reviewer: ram Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/07/04 Title: Chapter 1: Anatomy of a Character - Dark Willow

I am most impressed with the approach this author has taken on Willow. Getting inside Willow's head; developing the rationale for Willow's change. Starting from day 1. This author has great insight. I hope to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: i found season 6 horribly fascinating on so mant different levels. and alyson was,in a word,incredible.She was every psychology major dream come true.okay at least dark willow was mine. i knew that she was something so much more then what we saw. there was so much going on with willow that were never addressed. so it was no surprise that dark willow finally happened. i say finally because i know there is no way one can have all that happened to willow emotionally and not have a way of getting out. when you hold so many emoyions inside for so long they find a way of getting out one way or another.for dark willow she was simply waiting for her chance to escape. she was years in the making.willow`s use of magicks was her way to freedom. using the word 'freedom' because dark willow has been trying to get out for some time. i already gave what i believe to be perfect examples in my anatomy of a character.i have been a fan of willow from day 1.i was drawn to her right away.as for dark willow she too holds a special place with me. i just want peolpe to see her for all that she is. killer yes. but also she was a protector. she is in a sense why willow did survive the tramaus of her younger years. i know this probally sounds strange to be in a way defending dark willow but in all actuallity if not for her willow might have been emotional broke years ago. but yes dark willow, once freed wasnt willing to go back. she wants to live. she doesnt understand that its not possible for her and willow to co-exist. they have been doing so for so long that dark willow believes its her place to have what she wants which is life.hold on to your seats. its going to be a hell of a ride.

Reviewer: ram Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/07/04 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

The tension, the passion, the conflict, the anguish, the pain: it's all there; I the reader experienced it all; all because this author knows how to make me the reader experience it all; and still wanting more!

Reviewer: ram Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/07/04 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

With one tiny exception, Willow for Dawn in one sentence, this second chapter exceeds even my expectations. Your writing keeps getting better and better. With all the tragedy that was going on, you even added a phrase that caused me to laugh in spite of the pain I was feeling. It's that small gem of a laugh, that makes this story as touching as it has been. Look forward to the next.

The authors own nothing. Joss, UPN, WB, etc. own Buffy, the show, the characters, the places, and the backstory. The authors own any original plots.