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Eighteen Days by Elen starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Chapter One--A Cautionary Tale of World Save-age. It isn't NC-17 yet, but I thought I'd better make it NC-17 to be on the safe side. All of the email addresses used for Willow, her friends and parents were made up for this story. Please don?t use them!
Characters: Spike, Willow - Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance - Rating: NC-17 - Warnings: Spoilers for BtVS S2, Spoilers for BtVS S3, Spoilers for BtVS S1 - Chapters: 33
Published: 30/01/04 - Updated: 10/10/04 - Completed: No

Reviewer: mitasova Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/02/04 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I'm liking it a lot, it reminds me of In the Company of Wolves. Update?

Author's Response: Chapters Seven through Fourteen are being beta read now. I love In The Company of Wolves. Its one of my favorites.

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Date: 18/02/04 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Seven

?Watcher,? Spike intoned. He kind of liked being a kidnapper. All dark and ominous and evil. It gave him a warm feeling all over. Hee. I think Spikey plan's going to turn around and bite him in the ass. Please, continue.

Author's Response: Thanks! Spike's so much fun to write. He's just so happy to be bad.

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Date: 01/03/04 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Ten

I'm hooked. Spike reminiscences of the civilization's progress were so nice. Please, continue.

Author's Response: Big history freak here. I love having characters to play with who can have the long view over a century or two to play around with, though I tend to think of Spike as being a very in the present sort of character.

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Date: 23/03/04 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Fourteen

A very good chapter. I adore your Harmony, and the writing just keeps improving. Well done!

Author's Response: I never thought I'd get a handle on Harmony. After Chapter One I didn't really have anything for her to do but stand around and pout or be mean to Willow.

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Date: 27/03/04 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fifteen

Terrific, just terrific. The part in the club was a tad slow in pacing, but the rest - the desperation, the suspence - wow.

Author's Response: It was the insertion of lyrics, wasn't it? I really struggled with myself over that. I love both of those songs, but it throws me when people include lyrics in the story.

The authors own nothing. Joss, UPN, WB, etc. own Buffy, the show, the characters, the places, and the backstory. The authors own any original plots.