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Stable Artifice by erimentha starstarstarstarstar [ - ]
Willow?s on the run with Spike, Angel and Dru. But things start getting complicated between her and Spike.
Willow/Spike
Characters: Spike, Willow, Angel, Drusilla - Genres: Action/Adventure - Rating: R - Warnings: Spoilers for BtVS S4 - Chapters: 15
Published: 16/09/03 - Updated: 26/01/04 - Completed: No

Reviewer: Sara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/01/04 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Happy New Year, Eri sweets. I hate to nag but I really need more story goodness. Please???? Loved it so much so far. Please take me further....... :-)

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Reviewer: Sara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/02/04 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Excellent addition to the tale. For a first timer you crafted the new NC-17 part very well. I am enjoying this story very much and look forward to more soon. Valkyrn

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Reviewer: Sara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/03/04 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Where are you? :-( I've been checking back every day for what seems like forever with no luck. I need a fix. Pleeeeeeaaase. This is such a great story, I want so much to read the rest. Valkyrn

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Reviewer: Sara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/05/04 Title: Chapter 15: Part 15

Well, you're either dead or have one of the worst cases of writer's block in history. I realize that you owe me nothing and I bow before you that you're sharing this story with me at all. Buuuutttt.....I reallly really wanna know where it's gonna go next, and it's been a reallllllly long time since you've updated. So, if you're out there somewhere, please let us know when we can expect an update. Please? I miss this story. You have 93 reviews here - all positive. You must be doing something right. :-)

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A Gift by Emily North starstarstarstarstar [ - ]
What if Angelus decided to go after something other than Willow's fish?
Willow/Spike
Characters: Spike, Willow - Genres: Romance, Drama, Angst - Rating: NC-17 - Warnings: Spoilers for BtVS S2, Violence - Chapters: 28
Published: 05/11/03 - Updated: 18/06/06 - Completed: No

Reviewer: Sara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/05/04 Title: Chapter 19: Section 19

I have to say, this chapter was a nice touch. The physical torture and sadism can get pretty overwhelming in the narrative - it's a good break to have the next task set Willow, although not a simple one, at least not truly sadistic. Narcissitic on Angelus' part, of course, but not actual torture. And the recitation choice, and their interaction within it, was a good touch too. It reminds me of the political nature of the old English nursery rhymes. When kings and queens ruled absolutely, and speaking your mind could easily get you killed, people taught their children these simple little nursery rhymes to sing in the street while they play. Everyone, king on down to lowliest subject, knew the true meaning of the words, but who could punish the children for their nonsense rhymes? It was political satire and commentary, safer than actually speaking out. To me that is what Willow is doing - using the recitation to speak out without actually doing so and thereby protecting herself. And Angelus is fully aware of this, but is still charmed by the words and the character behind their choice. Excellent chapter. Thank you.

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How? by LivvyWriter starstarstarstarhalf-star [ - ]
Willow is about to take drastic measures when Oz leaves her with something.
Just Willow
Characters: Willow - Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Angst, Songfic - Rating: PG-13 - Warnings: Spoilers for BtVS S4, Pregnancy/Baby, Language, Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1
Published: 31/12/03 - Updated: 31/12/03 - Completed: No

Reviewer: Sara Signed starhalf-star
Date: 01/01/04 Title: Chapter 1: How?

Well, the story itself has promise, but when you combine the song lyrics - which seemed to be most of the body of the story - with the shortness of it I think there is too much happening to handle in such a short piece. I guess I'd prefer to see more build up of plot and escalation of emotion before the big finish. If it continues in this way I wouldn't read it further. If it settles down into some more developed plot and dialogue then I am very interested in it. I hope this helps. I am not trying to be negative, but a review is useless if it's dishonest and offers no actual feedback. Obviously some others really liked it as it is, so perhaps there is a happy audience for this just as it is. Thank you for sharing it with us. Putting out your fiction is a big deal and I am very grateful for those who do so and provide us with new tales to take in and consider. Happy New Year too! I'll be back to see chapter two.

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Sweet Demise by jennnillu starstarstarstarstar [ - ]
Spike shows up, there's a spell...Willow finds herself in a bit of a sticky situation...Angel to the rescue...or something like that
Willow/Angel
Characters: Willow, Angel - Genres: Drama, Angst - Rating: R - Warnings: Spoilers for BtVS S4 - Chapters: 26
Published: 02/01/04 - Updated: 02/07/04 - Completed: Yes

Reviewer: Sara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/06/04 Title: Chapter 6: 6

I've just started reading this story, up to chapter six, and am enjoying it very much. I like the Willow - Angel(us) interaction so far and I am getting a taste for what the later chapters will unfold. Excellent so far, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it.

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Reviewer: Sara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/06/04 Title: Chapter 22: 22

Okay, I've read everything up thru chapter 22 and I'm hooked. Please update quickly, okay? I love this story. Thank you.

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Reviewer: Sara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/06/04 Title: Chapter 23: 23

Happiness. Thanks for the update. Can't wait to see what you do next. I really love your story. Valkryn

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Reviewer: Sara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/04 Title: Chapter 26: 26-27

Very nice. Thank you. :-)

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