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Series
How? by LivvyWriter starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Willow is about to take drastic measures when Oz leaves her with something.
Just Willow
Characters: Willow - Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Angst, Songfic - Rating: PG-13 - Warnings: Spoilers for BtVS S4, Pregnancy/Baby, Language, Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1
Published: 31/12/03 - Updated: 31/12/03 - Completed: No

Reviewer: Lucinda Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/07/05 Title: Chapter 1: How?

Not a bad idea, but it wouldn't hurt to flesh it out a little more. A few more details and descriptions, get a little more into what's going through Willow's head - is she thinking about memories of when Oz was still there? Grieving - in painful detail? Is the bottle large or small, over-the-counter or prescription?

Series
The Faceless Clock Trilogy by Gabrielle starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Drusilla's plan to win back her Daddy has unexpected consequences.
Willow/Angel
Characters: Willow, Angel, Drusilla - Genres: Drama, Angst - Rating: PG-13 - Warnings: None - Chapters: 3
Published: 11/11/04 - Updated: 11/11/04 - Completed: Yes

Reviewer: Lucinda Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/11/04 Title: Chapter 1: Knew Too Late

Well, I'm not sure why nobody's left a review saying so before this, but... Very nice job with these. I can see the events progressing, it's delightful to let my mind try to fill in the side details of what's in everyone's minds in the ficlets that aren't from their perspective, and the emotional intensity is potent. The only thing that I'd even consider wanting changed is the fact that a) it's a bit short and b) it's finished. While finishing projects is good, wonderful even, I found this one enjoyable enough that I'm a bit sad that it's done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was terrified that the lack of reviews meant that no one liked this story! I am so pleased that you do! And I'm glad you feel that it was good enough that you wish there were more! You've really lifted my spirits!



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