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Boats Against the Current by Gabrielle starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
*Sequel to Later in the Ashes* Angel and Willow are living together in Los Angeles. But will they be able to maintain their happy lives when Cordelia's visions drag them all back to Sunnydale?
Willow/Angel
Characters: Angel, Cordelia, Giles, Spike, Willow - Genres: Angst, Romance - Rating: NC-17 - Warnings: Spoilers for AtS S1, Spoilers for BtVS S4 - Chapters: 12
Published: 08/10/08 - Updated: 23/12/08 - Completed: Yes

Reviewer: SMac Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Great start to the newest tale in the series. I'm looking forward to the Sunnydale folks reactions when they finally realize what is going on with Willow and Angel. However long that takes. LOL Thanks for posting this so quickly. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks! I am so glad you like this new part of the saga!

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Reviewer: SMac Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Yes yes!! Love the update, the progression. I have one niggling complaint and if you hate it then ignore me but you keep mentioning how stupid or wrong or unworthy the other Sunnydale folks are at every turn and it seems laid on a little thick. The reader knows what's happening on that front so it isn't recessary to put down the other characters intelligence and/or motives almost every time they speak, even to establish how Angel thinks about them or Willow's thoughts. It's just too much injected into the narrative to me. Other than that I'm thirlled with the chapter and the story so far. Thanks for sharing with us again and I hope you'll update again very soon.

Author's Response: I\'m sorry that you feel I\'m \"bashing\". I certainly didn\'t intend to do that.

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Reviewer: SMac Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/11/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

I'm going to be very shocked if it's actually Spike at that door. Is Angel reverting to a completely territorial us vs them world view where if you aren't part of his narrowly defined household then you are stupid and not workth consideration or respect? Becuase that's how it's coming off. If it's plot driven and explained at some point then that works. If it's just character bashing gone wild then it's very distracting in the narrative. Can you at least explain the Dragnet-like negativity for every other character in the narrative and it's constant hammering within the narrative. It's all within Angel's thoughts so I am still reading, hoping for an explanation for it. Thanks.

Author's Response: I\'m very sorry that you dislike my story. I wish I knew what else to say. I thank you for following it.

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Reviewer: SMac Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/12/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Good chapter/ Thanks. :-)

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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Reviewer: SMac Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/12/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Another good chapter. Could Buffy be coming around, or is she setting them up in some way? Hmmmm....

Author's Response: We shall see very soon... Thanks!

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The Secret (Rewrite) by Gabrielle starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
A darker take on the events of Lover's Walk and the aftermath of them. It begins with Spike deciding there will be some having after all. *This is a complete and total rewrite of a story I first wrote starting back in 2004. It will be very different in many ways from the original.*
Willow/Angel
Characters: Angel, Buffy, Cordelia, Faith, Giles, Oz, Spike, Wesley, Willow, Xander - Genres: Angst - Rating: NC-17 - Warnings: Hurt/Comfort, Non-consensual, Rape/NC, Spoilers for BtVS S3, Violence - Chapters: 46
Published: 30/12/08 - Updated: 10/08/09 - Completed: Yes

Reviewer: SMac Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/06/09 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter Thirty-Two A

Excellent (as always!) :-)

Author's Response: Thank you! And please take care of yourself, okay?

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Reviewer: SMac Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/09 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter Thirty-Two B

Excellent!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you are taking care of yourself.

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Reviewer: SMac Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/06/09 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter Thirty

Excellent as always!

Author's Response: I really appreciate the feedback!

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Reviewer: SMac Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/06/09 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty-One A

Excellent as always!

Author's Response: Again, much appreciated!

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Reviewer: SMac Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/06/09 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty-One B

I hurt my arm and I'm not supposed to type so I'm leaving generic 'Excellent as always!' reviews but if I could I would say so much more. Thank you for continuing to share this story with us.

Author's Response: Please don\'t aggravate your injury! Believe me, all your fb is cherished!

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