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Reviews by Kaz
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Night School by Gabrielle starstarstarstarstar [ - ]
Angelus is bored. Willow is unwary.
Willow/Angelus
Characters: Angel, Angelus, Willow - Genres: Angst - Rating: NC-17 - Warnings: Spoilers for BtVS S2, Rape/NC, Non-consensual - Chapters: 11
Published: 25/06/04 - Updated: 19/07/04 - Completed: Yes

Reviewer: Kaz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29/06/04 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Very interesting. I've read a few Angelus/Willow set in season 2 but I am intrigued by yours. You've got Angelus' voice down very well, and Willow's pretty good too. The only thing I found a bit off-putting was the change of POV every paragraph. I'd make it a little more obvious - use asterisks or change POVs every chapter or part. The way you have it now, I had to re-read to make sure I knew who I was "hearing", if that makes sense? But overall, excellent job for your first fic and I want more! :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Kaz. And I will keep your advice in mind as I write future chapters. I truly appreciate your input. It's very helpful.

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Orphan
Characters: None - Genres: None - Rating: - Warnings: None - Chapters: 0
Published: 31/12/69 - Updated: 31/12/69 - Completed: No

Reviewer: Kaz Signed starstar
Date: 13/01/05 Title: None

Your fic has numerous spelling and punctuation errors. I'd suggest getting a beta reader and revising this because the errors are very distracting.

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Cold Heat, Soft Steel series by Gabrielle starstarstarstarstar [ - ]
Willow and Spike share a night of passion. But it doesn't mean the same thing to both of them. Willow POV. *Written for the Winter of Spillow LJ Community*
Willow/Spike
Characters: Spike, Willow - Genres: Drama, Angst - Rating: R - Warnings: None - Chapters: 6
Published: 14/01/05 - Updated: 05/05/06 - Completed: Yes

Reviewer: Kaz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/05 Title: Chapter 4: Soft-Spoken

Ack! It's ... there's no more? Well, what happens next? Does Spike get his heart broken? I need to know, woman! :D I really think you captured the differing feelings of the participants in a one night stand very well - especially Willow. Lovely job and ... what happens next?

Author's Response: I will have an update for this soon, Kaz, I promise! And I am so pleased you like the way I've shown the different perspectives both Willow and Spike have! Your good opinion means the moon and stars to me!

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Tangled Web by Gabrielle starstarstarstarstar [ - ]
Willow becomes involved with both Spike and Angel. *Written for Femailofthespecies' birthday*
Willow/Threesomes
Characters: Threesomes, Angel, Spike, Willow - Genres: Drama, Angst - Rating: PG-13 - Warnings: Multiple Partners - Chapters: 1
Published: 08/03/05 - Updated: 08/03/05 - Completed: Yes

Reviewer: Kaz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/05 Title: Chapter 1: Tangled Web

*wibbles* Well, that certainly was angsty. *sniffles* Lovely job and lovely descriptions. Manipulative!Spike is right on target, I think, and I can totally see Willow falling for it. And poor Angel and ... *sniffs some more* Poor all of them! Great job!

Author's Response: Oh my stars! I am tickled plaid that you even read this, let alone that you hold it in such high regard! I am so glad that you think I depicted everyone believably! You know how much I care about characterization! Thanks again!

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Bad Habit by Jami starstarstarstarstar [ - ]
Willow makes a painful decision.
Willow/Richard
Characters: None - Genres: Angst - Rating: G - Warnings: Spoilers for BtVS S7 - Chapters: 1
Published: 24/03/05 - Updated: 24/03/05 - Completed: Yes

Reviewer: Kaz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1/1

*sniffles* Make them happy! Please? Great emotions in this piece, and I can totally empathize with Willow. Lovely job!

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