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Orphan
Characters: None - Genres: None - Rating: - Warnings: None - Chapters: 0
Published: 31/12/69 - Updated: 31/12/69 - Completed: No

Reviewer: Kaz Signed starstarstar
Date: 26/07/03 Title: None

Hey Laura, This is great first fic! I think if you added some returns to separate it all from one big paragraph, it would really make the story a little more readable. Remember for each new speaker there should be a new paragraph. And for each new paragraph there should be a new ... paragraph. :)

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Midnight Special by willowluv starstarstarstarhalf-star [ - ]
Willow Buffy and Spike go to L.A. for the grand opening of Caritas where things quickly get out of hand. This is my entry for the Willow-fic-thon
Willow/Wesley
Characters: Wesley - Genres: Comedy - Rating: PG - Warnings: None - Chapters: 1
Published: 25/07/03 - Updated: 25/07/03 - Completed: Yes

Reviewer: Kaz Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 26/07/03 Title: Chapter 1: Midnight Special

Very interesting fic! :) I wish we could have seen more of the Wesley/Willow intereactions, but the singing was very funny! :)

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La Bruja al Rescate by Skeeter451 starstarstarstarstar [ - ]
Willow receives a gift from a lost friend and returns the favor in her own unique way.
Willow/Riley
Characters: Riley, Willow - Genres: Romance, Drama, Angst, Challenge, Friendship - Rating: NC-17 - Warnings: Spoilers for BtVS S7, Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1
Published: 26/07/03 - Updated: 26/07/03 - Completed: Yes

Reviewer: Kaz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/07/03 Title: Chapter 1: The Witch to the Rescue

Fabulous!!!!! Love it love it love it! Yay W/Riley lovin'! :) Great job!

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Anywhere You Go by sonyaelflady starstarstarstarstar [ - ]
An alternative ending to the episode 'Wrecked'; Willow runs away from Sunnydale and ends up in Hogsmeade just in time to deal with the aftermath of a Death Eater prank. Then things get interesting. Willow/Snape, as well as other pairings. Incomplete. Be warned that there will be angst and violence and character death (not Willow or Snape).
Willow/Severus
Characters: None - Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance, Drama, Angst, Crossover - Rating: R - Warnings: Spoilers for BtVS S6, Violence, Language, Hurt/Comfort, Character Death, Non-consensual - Chapters: 32
Published: 04/10/03 - Updated: 14/03/05 - Completed: No

Reviewer: Kaz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/10/03 Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Pathetic

This is one of the most interesting and unique HP crossover fics I've read in a very long time. The characterizations are spot on, the plot moves well and I like how you've made me interested in Narcissa! I'm wondering what's going on back in Sunnydale and if they'll suddenly resurface, but I doubt you'll just come out and tell me. :) I'm also hoping that Draco will realize that he doesn't have to go home. Curious as to what's going on with Narcissa's Polaroids though. Fabulous job and keep up the fantastic work!

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Reviewer: Kaz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/10/03 Title: Chapter 16: Shatter

Another absolutely fabulous chapter! :) I'm really enjoying this. And GO Narcissa! I'm so proud of her I could just burst. Hope she doesn't get in trouble for that AK though. Anyway, looking forward to more! And where's Draco anyway? :)

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Reviewer: Kaz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01/11/03 Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Pathetic

:( Poor Hermione! But this was a wonderfully written chapter. I saw a few typographical mistakes (breath instead of breathe, etc) but other than that, fabulous job! I'm curious about poor Draco too. How's he going to deal with what happened at home? Looking forward to more!

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Reviewer: Kaz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/12/03 Title: Chapter 20: The Place Between

Another lovely chapter! Ginny's shower scene was really powerful -- I also like how she reacted to the use of the name 'Voldemort'. I'm growing more and more fond of Viktor ... I don't usually support assassins but still -- awwww. And Ron's dilemma of what to write is so perfect. I'm definitely looking forward to more, especially Draco's continued reaction and Snape's answer.

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Rebellious Series 3: Controlling Chaos by Elisabeth starstarstarstarstar [ - ]
Sequel to 'All Out Uprising'. Willow's friends find out about her relationship with Spike.
Willow/Threesomes
Characters: Spike, Willow - Genres: Romance - Rating: R - Warnings: None - Chapters: 15
Published: 12/10/03 - Updated: 18/11/03 - Completed: Yes

Reviewer: Kaz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25/12/03 Title: Chapter 15: Part 15

Great job on this. I don't usually read W/S fic, but this was lovely-- *grins* especially the ones with Angel too.

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Stupid by Shanna starstarstarstarstar [ - ]
Willow goes to St. Louis to find a new Slayer, and gets more than she bargained for.
Willow/Richard
Characters: None - Genres: Comedy, PWP - Rating: NC-17 - Warnings: Spoilers for BtVS S7, Spoilers for AtS S5 - Chapters: 1
Published: 21/12/03 - Updated: 21/12/03 - Completed: Yes

Reviewer: Kaz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/12/03 Title: Chapter 1: Stupid

Shanna,

What a great story! Could I hope for a sequel? I'd love to see what happens with them (and Spike the Bunny of course!)

~Kaz

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Eat, Drink, Be Merry by Dafmeister starstarstarstarhalf-star [ - ]
Buffy, Willow, a large bowl of ice-cream - where could this be leading?
Rated NC-17
Characters: Buffy, Willow - Genres: Romance, PWP, Challenge, Fluff, Friendship - Rating: NC-17 - Warnings: Spoilers for BtVS S2, Spoilers for BtVS S3, Spoilers for BtVS S4 - Chapters: 1
Published: 18/01/04 - Updated: 18/01/04 - Completed: Yes

Reviewer: Kaz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/01/04 Title: Chapter 1: -

Lovely job on this. The writing is technically quite good and I really liked how you wove canon into it at the beginning. The initial friendship between Buffy and Willow is very believable and I like how you incorporated all the challenge requirements (I issued the challenge, btw). You've done their dialogue quite well too. I could totally hear it in my head. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more from you! You made me like a W/B fic and that's not usually one of the 'ships I enjoy. Great job!

Author's Response: :-) Thanks Kaz! I spotted the challenge on Your Mission ages ago - couldn't belive no-one had answered it. Ot maybe it's just me that like the thought of Willow naked and covered in ice-cream... Thankyou for your comments. It's really nice to have feedback that's more than just one sentence! I'm glad the characterisation worked - that was my biggest worry. You've certainly boosted my confidence :-)

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