Reviews For Afternoon Delight
Reviewer: Howard Russell Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/08/06 - 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very good. Excellent misdirection. I spent the first part of this fic wondering why you mentioned "Love Is A Gift" since this 'first time' story didn't fit. Then, when Xander showed up, I recognized the dialogue and thought you were just fleshing out Willow's fantasy (pun fully intended.) Then the end still fooled me. Very well done.