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Reviewer: Nonhalema Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/10/08 - 02:14 pm Title: One of One


Reviewer: Thessaly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/06 - 02:57 pm Title: One of One

Dammit, all my previous reviews went missing. I'll have to summarise: Wheeeeee! Fabulous! I love the historical relationship you're laying out for Willow and Spike; how they know each other to a certain point but can still affect each other unexpectedly; the sense of dependence on each other, even if neither of them would admit it. I love your crafty sense of metaphor, I love the pacing and I love, love, love the rising tension between unchippy Spike and the resolutely good Willow. At this point, "He was going to eat the witch" and "He savored that perfect moment, when the pressure of his fangs against her neck was just enough to convince her skin to part and let him slide inside. His reward, a mouthful of pure, delicious blood, was enough to make him groan with satisfaction", I had bad thoughts and giggled to myself. Subtext, anyone? Or maybe I've just got a mind like a cesspit. Love it, More please? Thessaly

Author's Response: Thanks! And I'm sorry about the reviews--when I was updating each story in the series, the summary was saying that it was the first story in the series, even when it was the third or fourth. So I had to delete all the stories and enter them all separately. I'm so glad you're enjoying the relationship I'm trying to build between them. Neither of them are perfect, but they just seem to fit together somehow. Especially right now. As for where your mind went, um, well, mine was right there along with ya. *grin* Thanks for the wonderful feedback, you aways make my day with it!

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