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Reviewer: Orange Bulldog Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30/04/05 - 10:26 am Title: Part 4

Interesting premise...do keep it up. You might want to consider a beta reader though, you have some spelling and grammar issues that detract from it. Also, sometimes it's not clear for paragraphs who is talking. If that's what you intended then okay, but if it's not you might want to consider that.

Author's Response: Cool thank you for letting me know, both my Beta and I usually do this with no sleep, lol so we don't catch all of it. But thanks again for your Review.

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