Reviews For Worlds Apart
Reviewer: Orange Bulldog Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/04/05 - 10:26 am Title: Part 4
Interesting premise...do keep it up. You might want to consider a beta reader though, you have some spelling and grammar issues that detract from it.
Also, sometimes it's not clear for paragraphs who is talking. If that's what you intended then okay, but if it's not you might want to consider that.
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