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Reviewer: historyguru Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/03/05 - 10:10 pm Title: 13

THE END?!?! Sorry, didn't mean to shout - but say it ain't so! I adore this story and would love to know what's going to happen to Willow and Spike (and Illyria, too). *Sigh*, it was a beautiful story and I'm thrilled that you shared it with us - I'm just greedy and would love more. Awesome job - the ending was very lovely and sad and hopeful, all at the same time.

Reviewer: Spikes Red Queen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/03/05 - 08:30 pm Title: 13

I feel so bad for Willow for loosing her friend and I love the part where Spike helped Willow out of the car but I am in serious denial here. That can't be the end! Please, please tell me you have a sequel planned?!?! Please? This story was so great, you just have to continue it!

Reviewer: Spikes Red Queen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/03/05 - 08:46 pm Title: 8

Wow, that was so emotionally intense. It was so sad to hear about Giles, you made me cry. You handled it so beautifully and everything is written so well. You've really captured everyone's character wonderfully and the interactions have been great! I really look forward to reading more...soon I hope. :)

Reviewer: historyguru Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/03/05 - 03:35 pm Title: 6

I can just see Spike thinking "well, that went well". I was wondering how Willow would react to Illyria and Spike - especially since she would know that someting about Illyria wasn't right and she expected Spike to be dead. I can't wait to see how the meeting between Susan and Spike goes (at least I'm assuming that Susan is running over to the boarding house). And what happened to Giles?!? That last bit certainly took me by surprise. Awesome story - can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: Spikes Red Queen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/05 - 08:51 pm Title: 4

I am bouncing in my seat, I can't wait to see what happens next. I love your Illyria/Spike interaction. You have captured everyone's character perfectly. Update soon.

Reviewer: Spikes Red Queen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/03/05 - 06:37 pm Title: 2

I am really looking forward to reading more of this wonderful story. I wonder what's gunna happen once Spike finds Willow?...Great characterization, hope for more soon!

Reviewer: historyguru Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/03/05 - 06:27 pm Title: 2

I'm intrigued by these beginning two chapters. I loved the description of Willow's little sanctuary and the interaction between Illyria and Spike. I can't wait to see where you're going with this and how all the relationships are going to play out. Fantastic beginning!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm pleased with how this has turned out. I have most of it written, but am waiting to post on certian days. Should have an update soon.

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