Reviews For First Day of School
Reviewer: Khyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/06/05 - 10:50 pm Title: Doomed
I really like the concept and story, but the grammar needs some work. I'd like to read this after it's been proofread and updated. Unfortunately, I couldn't make it past the second chapter because of all the errors. I admit I'm an ESL teacher, so that probably makes me more sensitive than usual.
Reviewer: koudelka Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/05 - 03:22 pm Title: What are you?
Oh, this story is so good! When are you going to add the next chapter? I so can't wait!