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Reviewer: psimetis Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/08/04 - 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 4

wow, things are really heating up, love a good intrigue/mystery, but i can't help trepidation, because it looks like some scoobies are going to be caught in the crossfire! *bites nails* looking forward to more action and potential romance! ;) best, ~e!

Author's Response: Psi , thank you. Your feedback means alot especially considering how amazing a writer you are! I will do my best thanks again. Paula

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Date: 26/07/04 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 3

interesting beginning and orig. character. like your characterization of tara. i'm going to assume she's the phoenix for now. ;) looking forward to seeing where this goes. best~elizabeth (psimetis)

Author's Response: Thank you so much.It amazes me how much faster this flows in your brain, as for Tara well keep reading lol. I will try and update as regularly as work and my imagination allow lol.

Reviewer: Dreamweaver Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/04 - 07:40 pm Title: Prologue

Uuhhhh.....Well.....I guess it's okay. But, I have to say one thing. HUH? Accord to the summary section, the fic is supposed to be a Willow crossed with the Anita Blake world. Y'lost me with this first chapter. Is this fic a AB crossover or isn't it? If this is, you might want to change your beginning notations section so that people know and don't set the entire fic by the first chapt. If it isn't you probably should change the thing in your summary to reflect that.

Reviewer: Dreamweaver Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/04 - 07:38 pm Title: Prologue

Uuhhhh.....Well.....I guess it's okay. But, I have to say one thing. HUH? Accord to the summary section, the fic is supposed to be a Willow crossed with the Anita Blake world. Y'lost me with this first chapter. Is this fic a AB crossover or isn't it? If this is, you might want to change your beginning notations section so that people know and don't set the entire fic by the first chapt. If it isn't you probably should change the thing in your summary to reflect that.

Author's Response: Dreamweaver, Thank you for writing and I agree with you wholeheartedly. I submitted the story as Willow/Other. Someone added the crossover bit . I have written the webmistress asking on how to remove that part. Thank you for reviewing this start for me. Have a great day. Paula Byers

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