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Reviewer: Rosemont Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 - 09:53 pm Title: Intervention

Probably the best author I have come across since becoming a fan of BTVS. I am so sad that this story is incomplete. I thought it was brilliant how each member of the trio had such a different "hunting" style. Perfectly fit to their personalities. I wish I could climb through my laptop and smack you on the head for leaving me hanging. Oh Well.

Reviewer: phoenixgod2000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/01/06 - 07:24 pm Title: Intervention

I came upon this story when it was rec'd on Xanderzone yahoogroup. while you didn't get the greatest reception there, I for one love this series. I happen to like darker end stories and stories with strong core scooby vibe. The relationship between Buffy, Willow, and Xander is a lot of fun to read about. I think you made only two misteps in the story. First off, the Jenny part of the storyline is very bizare and I'm not sure she fits so far into what you have written. Maybe that will change with future parts (hint, hint) but right now, the parts with her and Giles almost seem like they belong in a different story. The second, I hate to call it a mistep because I don't know how it will pan out, is Cordelia. I didn't quite buy her incorporation into the group at the end of the chapter. She never really seemed like she was part of the inner circle enough to create a strong enough bond to last through the turning. Neither Willow, nor Buffy ever liked her all that much and Xander seemed to get over her pretty swiftly after they broke up. While I can understand and believe in the big three bond that would transcend a vamping, I just don't see how the same can hold true with Cordy. She was always just a little on the outs, more of a hanger on than a genuine group member. Still, once again, we shall see how things pan out. Can't wait to get Giles and Jenny hooking up with the big three and how Cordy is going to enter the beds...umm, I mean, the uhhh, lives of Xander, Buffy, and WIllow :)

Reviewer: opi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/12/04 - 03:52 pm Title: Pillow Talk (prelude)

Oh, I like the dynamics between all of them. And, ergo, continuation!

Reviewer: BHV Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/04 - 05:28 pm Title: Pillow Talk (prelude)

I literally (almost) just stumbled across your update and I was delighted that you'd continued this. As I read this chapter, I could see this series of events happening. I believed it the way you wrote it. Particularly I am impressed with the characterization. We all know B, W, and X but we don't know what they would be like as vampires--wait! Vampires in THIS context. Not the wishverse, not the worst case nightmare scenario. Given the context you set up, there is a sad logic to these events. the characters we know act as I imagine they probably would given that they are now vampires. I like also that you don't spend a lot of time trying to justify their actions. They are vampires now-we know what vampires do. And the fact that they are vampires certainly frees you up a great deal to tell a bigger story. I like where you've gone so far. I hope you continue but as usual, I won't be holding my breath... .

Reviewer: BHV Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/04 - 05:27 pm Title: Pillow Talk (prelude)

I literally (almost) just stumbled across your update and I was delighted that you'd continued this. As I read this chapter, I could see this series of events happening. I believed it the way you wrote it. Particularly I am impressed with the characterization. We all know B, W, and X but we don't know what they would be like as vampires--wait! Vampires in THIS context. Not the wishverse, not the worst case nightmare scenario. Given the context you set up, there is a sad logic to these events. the characters we know act as I imagine they probably would given that they are now vampires. I like also that you don't spend a lot of time trying to justify their actions. They are vampires now-we know what vampires do. And the fact that they are vampires certainly frees you up a great deal to tell a bigger story. I like where you've gone so far. I hope you continue but as usual, I won't be holding my breath... .

Reviewer: coffee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/11/04 - 02:00 pm Title: All's Fair

I'm really enjoying this. It's different. And I like the way you've written the relationship between the three of them.

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