Reviews For Sensory Overload
Reviewer: Elen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/04 - 01:48 pm Title: Smell
This is just so well written and plotted, and interesting because of the change of point of view. For two chapters we've Spike through Willow's and he's a force of nature. In Chapter Three, when you get to Spike's point of view it switches from geewhizwoowiezowie, sweet, goofy Willowyness to a perspective that is carnal, sensual, tender, and a bit conflicted.
Mish does two really hard things really well. I think she has a flair for t he comic, and instinct for things that are really funny. She also writes great sex scenes, which is a fairly complex bit of technical writing. In the first review of this chapter masterbation is lifted up as a sexy element of this chapter. This is the second time she uses masterbation in the overall story. I think it is an all too often ignored aspect of sexualtiy that she treats in a very respectful way.
I'm looking forward to more of this.
Reviewer: Strange_f Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/04 - 08:38 am Title: Smell
I tried to leave my review at AdultFanFiction.net, but it wouldn?t let me. Pout.
Gah, chapter three just blows me away. My face is hot. I have to read it again before I can write anything other than stunning. I wasn?t expecting Willow to, umm start touching herself like that; it just made the scene so much more erotic. Can?t wait to read chapter four.
Reviewer: sweetcakes66604 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/03/04 - 08:44 pm Title: Taste
This is one of the best Willow/Spike fics i've ever read. Update soon please.
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