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Reviews For Sensory Overload
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Reviewer: Elen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/04/04 - 01:48 pm Title: Smell

This is just so well written and plotted, and interesting because of the change of point of view. For two chapters we've Spike through Willow's and he's a force of nature. In Chapter Three, when you get to Spike's point of view it switches from geewhizwoowiezowie, sweet, goofy Willowyness to a perspective that is carnal, sensual, tender, and a bit conflicted. Mish does two really hard things really well. I think she has a flair for t he comic, and instinct for things that are really funny. She also writes great sex scenes, which is a fairly complex bit of technical writing. In the first review of this chapter masterbation is lifted up as a sexy element of this chapter. This is the second time she uses masterbation in the overall story. I think it is an all too often ignored aspect of sexualtiy that she treats in a very respectful way. I'm looking forward to more of this.

Author's Response: *blushing* Dang, girl, you flatter me! I don't know what to say except thank you for such beautiful words and I will strive to continue earning such compliments. ((((((HUGS))))))

Reviewer: Strange_f Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/04/04 - 08:38 am Title: Smell

I tried to leave my review at AdultFanFiction.net, but it wouldn?t let me. Pout. Gah, chapter three just blows me away. My face is hot. I have to read it again before I can write anything other than stunning. I wasn?t expecting Willow to, umm start touching herself like that; it just made the scene so much more erotic. Can?t wait to read chapter four.

Author's Response: *hehe* Well, at that particular moment the poor gal was in a nearly frantic state and as Spike clearly was not going to satisfy the hunger he'd created Willow just had to take matters into her own hands. ;)

Reviewer: sweetcakes66604 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/04 - 08:44 pm Title: Taste

This is one of the best Willow/Spike fics i've ever read. Update soon please.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter, but not making too much progress I fear. My beta will begin cracking the whip in a few days and get me back on track, though, so hopefully I'll get more posted soon.

Reviewer: Elen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/04 - 07:00 pm Title: Taste

Love this story! It's funny and sexy, and Willow's internal dialog is perfect.

Author's Response: Thankies. She's one of my favorite characters on the show to write inner dialog for, so I'm glad it's fitting for her. :)

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