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Reviewer: pharoh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/03/04 - 11:11 am Title: Epilogue- Summer Days

great story please make more

Reviewer: alltherealice Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16/03/04 - 04:16 am Title: Making Faces

I really enjoyed the beginning of this story. I've read up to where Spike and Angle show up and they all go to the meeting and Willow gets embarassed. After that I stopped because I don't like seeing Willow get embarassed. (I'll get back to it eventually though because it's nice to see characters written in a new way.) The only thing I have to say to the negative of this story is that the writing is a little abrubt in some places. By this I mean that it's jumpy, you'll be all detaily in some parts and then on a compltely different topic in others. I only noticed this because it is what I'm working on improving it in my own writing. It's not a big negative, but it's something you might try and work on. But since this is your first story (I assume it is anyway) and the natural flow of your writing is so enjoyable, I'm sure you'll get it all worked out soon.

Reviewer: lisa g Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/03/04 - 02:43 am Title: Epilogue- Summer Days

gah!! what a cliffie! Where's the sequel?!!!

Author's Response: It's being written as we speak.

Reviewer: lisa g Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/03/04 - 02:15 am Title: Visitors

hey! Sorry, but I just noticed a bit of a historical discrepancy in this chapter. You have the kids say the last time the soul restoration was in 1996. Are you not including in your timeline the incident in 2003 where Willow goes to LA and restores Angel's soul then? Or are you working under the assumption that everything in season 4 Angel has been forgotten? I'm curious.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for pointing that out. It slipped my mind. (I wrote that chapter REALLY late at night...) So, to cover my own ass, let's just say that the first soul restoration was the last DOCUMENTED case.....LOL

Reviewer: lisa g Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/03/04 - 04:27 am Title: Making Faces

I really love this, It has depth; the characters aren't sketches, they are photographs. This is a spectacular piece and I can't wait to read the rest of it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. That's quite possibly the nicest thing anyone has ever said about my story. If you're looking for more of my stories (yes, there is shameless self-promotion involved in this response) try my yahoogroup: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/firegoddessHPBtVSfanfiction/ The stories there are (so far) unfinished, but I do intend to finish them after I get done with 'Glamours' and its two sequels.

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