Great idea with the charmed necklace. Willow job hunting is something one doesn't see in many fics, very well done. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Heh, love the communication between Buffy and Willow. I liked that you used telepathy first. Nice twist.
I really like the idea of Edward's trainers looking at Buffy. You've intertwined the two worlds in a new and refreshing way.
Really great beginning. Your characterizations of Willow and Buffy are very good. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.