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Reviewer: Callieanestra Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/11/05 - 08:40 am Title: -

Great story, although you kind of skipped some of the foreplay that would happen because this situation does work but there is usually some angst with them both being women. But I like it that you wrote it as if this was just the natural path of their relationship which is how the show should have went in my opinion. really loved it in that they just excepted the change in their relationship like it was a foregone conclusion. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Orange Bulldog Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/05/05 - 01:10 pm Title: -

Pretty good, I as a rule don't like B/W unless there's lots of precursors to the sex, but you did a decent job with that, the memories and such.

Reviewer: Orange Bulldog Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/05/05 - 01:09 pm Title: -

Pretty good, I as a rule don't like B/W unless there's lots of precursors to the sex, but you did a decent job with that, the memories and such.

Reviewer: Kaz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/01/04 - 06:30 pm Title: -

Lovely job on this. The writing is technically quite good and I really liked how you wove canon into it at the beginning. The initial friendship between Buffy and Willow is very believable and I like how you incorporated all the challenge requirements (I issued the challenge, btw). You've done their dialogue quite well too. I could totally hear it in my head. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more from you! You made me like a W/B fic and that's not usually one of the 'ships I enjoy. Great job!

Author's Response: :-) Thanks Kaz! I spotted the challenge on Your Mission ages ago - couldn't belive no-one had answered it. Ot maybe it's just me that like the thought of Willow naked and covered in ice-cream... Thankyou for your comments. It's really nice to have feedback that's more than just one sentence! I'm glad the characterisation worked - that was my biggest worry. You've certainly boosted my confidence :-)

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