Reviews For Rebellious Series 1: Quiet Rebellion
Reviewer: Skytteflickan88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/06 - 09:20 am Title: Part 7
Great sex-story. I like the pictures you paint in my head. The characters don't act exactly like I think they would, although I believe that Willow could be a vixen if she wanted to. Spike was a little to soft and Buffy would definitly have staked Spike. That Willow moral issues is overwelmed by hormones is a little sad to read. But if we put the out-of-character-facts aside this is good. Well written. You didn't let you're hormones run away with you when you wrote the sex-scenes(which were almost all the time) like some writers do. You know when it gets kinda incoherent. But not with you. Gotta give you props for that. When I think of Spike naked I get all drooly. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Valkyrn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/10/03 - 03:02 am Title: Part 1
Well, that was a lot of fun to read! Too short by far, but the sequels should keep me amused for a bit. Excellent work, good characterization for what it is. I like long stories as short ones usually can't present enough subtlety and depth of characterization to please me, but this one was very good in those area with Willow and Spike, for a short one. I am not convinced why Spike, not chipped, would be so interested in Willow unless there's some ulterior motive I don't see or more of his motivations are given. But like I said, it was good for a short to medium length story and I thank you for sharing it with us.
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