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Reviewer: Fireheart Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/07/03 - 09:49 am Title: Pants Day

I liked it. It was silly. That can be fun.

Reviewer: dissappointed Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: 20/07/03 - 04:10 am Title: Pants Day

dude, if you wanna write an NC-17 you don't use use things like 'forgone conclusion' for an orgasm..happy satiation..buxom embrace...OVARIES UNITE???? wtf! i couldn't get past the first few paragraphs. The intimacy between willow and tara is anything but...which does not have any relation to the characters as they are a very loving and intiate couple as we see on tv. i can't see this in the writing at all. ease up a bit, make it more loving and use language thats gonna turn your audience on...i can't say 'foregone conclusion' is going to have the greatest affect... man id hate to get you into bed.

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