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Reviews For Scene of the Crime
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Reviewer: Skytteflickan88 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/06 - 04:32 pm Title: Prologue

One of the best fanfic I've ever read. The characters are portrayed really well. From time to time I thought that Spike was a little soft but that is explained by love. I admire how you wrote comedy and still could manage such a lovely/horrible ending. And you can write well in first person to, which I don't get a lot when I read fan fiction. We got our fill of ego with Spike but it was all still good. I didn't even mind that you switched back and forth from time to time with first and third person. And I'm usually very picky when it comes to that. It is horrible, sweet and very gripping. Oh god how I hate the ending, but I love the beginning and what comes in between. It was so sweet. But it ended so cruel, in chapter 10. Maybe you could write a short sequel where vampire-Willow torturing Spike to death, so that he would REALLY regret it. But it's not necessary. I'm killing him in my mind right now. I don't to a 100% like nr 9 either but it's so much better than nr 10. But that they would even consider turning makes me want to puke, but well, I can't like everything. I love the rest of the story though. I love this, simply just love this. Keep up the good work.

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