Reviews For The Garwinok Tale
Reviewer: Orange Bulldog Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/05 - 06:04 pm Title: 1
Interesting idea that had potential...but plots like this are hard to make realistic. Faith seducing Willow I can buy, and Willow accepting it I can also buy. But Buffy and Xander figuring it out on their own? And Buffy just randomly kissing Willow like that? Also, work on the lines - a lot of them were kinda out of character. But keep writing!